相信很多鸭鸭面对写作话题会“无语”，这说明写作素材积累得不够深刻或者不够广泛。在这样的时刻怎能不用汉语写作?要知道，用最熟悉的语言积累写作素材的速度是非常快的，因为它符合我们的逻辑思维。但同时，鸭鸭也应该注意，英语和汉语之间转化时是存在巨大差异的，尤其是在语序方面。所以积累素材的同时，也要练习语言，那么汉译英就是非常重要的途径。

　　题目：

　　13-02-16

　　Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prison, while other people think there are some alternatives (for example, doing work which is beneficial for local community).

　　Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　在我们现代和平的年代中，人们享受着生活的美好同时也遭受着一些违法人对我们的侵害。一些人认为这些违法者应该被送进监狱得到他们应有的惩罚， 然而 还有一些人认为他们可以做一些对社会有利的事情去弥补他们的过错。 我认为这两种说法都各有道理。

　　In such peaceful years, people are not only enjoying the fantastic lives but also suffering the harms from some lawbreakers at the same time. Some people think that the lawbreakers should be sent into the jail as a serious punishment. However, others claim that they can make some contributions to our community to correct their faults. In my opinion, both of these views are reasonable to certain extent.

　　违法者应该受到严重的惩罚，他们做出对社会和人民有害的事情就应该在监狱里认真反思争取重新做人。例如，有人在商场里吸烟导致重大火灾的发生造成数十人的死亡和财产的重大损失。对于这种人应该得到法律的制裁并用其毕生的时间去忏悔。我认为，像上述这种忽略他人生命的人应该被送到监狱。

　　Some lawbreakers should be punished by our society for the harmful incidents they made to both the community and the public. They need to have a deep consideration about their faults in the jail. For example, someone who smoked in a supermarket caused serious loses in both social economy and human lives. In such a case, they should get the punishment and have a think for their harmful behavior by spending the rest of life in prison. Personally, I think, those people ignoring other’s lives should get a serious punishment!

　　然而，尽管有些人做了违法的事情并且伤害了别人。他们也应该得到机会去弥补，为社会做一些贡献。很多人也是因为生活所迫或是不经意间犯了错误，源于对法律知识的不了解。政府应该对他们有足够的教育。我认为，人的一生短暂且宝贵，我们不应该剥夺他们为社会做贡献的权利。我们都是平等的都有相同的权利。

　　Nevertheless, although some people did the bad things to others, they have rights to get the opportunity to correct their unjustified behaviors by making more contributions to society. Most people made the mistakes by accident, basing on their unknowledgeable education. The government should be in charge of this situation. In my opinion, the life of an individual is short but precious, so we shouldn’t rub their rights making contributions to the world to gain some forgives. Everyone should be treated equally with the same rights and freedom, even a prisoner.

　　最后，我想说上述两种想法都很合理，然而我们应该是情况而定去原谅获取惩罚那些违法者。我们的政府也应该更注重对公众的法律教育以此来遏制违法事情的发生。这样，我们的未来将一片光明。

　　As a result, what I want to say is that both of these ideas are reasonable. However, we should regard different events according to various situations. It is an efficient way to prevent these illegal things from happening. In this case, our future will be bright and wonderful.

　　记得，一定不要盲目写英语作文，否则只是“错误”的机械重复，练得多反而伤害大。所以初始阶段写作一定要组织非常好的写作内容，以汉语的形式记录下来，然后再写成英文，慢慢形成内容和语言并行的能力。一定可以的，鸭鸭们加油!

　　作者简介：

陈思佳老师

　　陈思佳：吉林新东方国外部写作组教研负责人，雅思写作教龄3.5年。擅长分析解读官方材料、挖掘知识落地方法、诊断学生问题和提出解决办法。