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“课外活动”外加“好消息”

2016-09-09 10:56

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作者:吉林新东方 朱博


 

很多孩子的脑洞开掉之后,就再也合不上了。尤其在学了雅思口语之后,什么事儿都能联系到一起。比如“好消息”可以是“有一次跟朋友吃饭”,趁机向心爱的女孩儿表白,然后女孩儿say yes了!“好消息”还可以是“有机会去梦寐以求的地方玩耍了”,总之,烤鸭总是感觉一个答案只用在一个话题里,太可惜了,于是就各种合并。我们来看一下下面的思路,就是把“课外活动”跟“好消息”搞到了一起:

 

好消息:

I’d like to talk about the good news I received when I was in high school, which is that I got into my school’s football team.

I went crazy the moment I got this piece of news.

Football has always been my greatest passion. When I was little, my dream was to be a football player. My grandpa and my dad usually took me to live football matches. It’s fair to say that I fell in love with this sport from an early age.

When I attended high school, in order to join the football team, I trained really hard after school. My idol is David, and his spirit always inspires me.

But sadly, I didn’t get in the first year.

However, I was not a quitter. I tried harder the second year, but I still failed.

To be honest, I was a little frustrated, maybe my competitors were too strong, but there was also a possibility that my skills were not that good.

I thought I might never have the chance to be in that team, but just at that moment, I got a call from the coach, he said that I could train with the team for several months, and we’ll see what happens after that.

I was thrilled when I heard this. That means I could finally have the opportunity to receive professional training and guidance.

And I guess the rest is history, I successfully became a member of the team. So that’s the good news I’d like to talk to you about.

 

课外活动:

I’d like to talk about the extracurricular activity I did when I was in high school, which is playing football.

Football has always been my greatest passion. When I attended high school, in order to join the football team, I trained really hard every day after school. My idol is David, and his spirit always inspires me.

But sadly, I didn’t get in the first year. I was really frustrated, ‘cause I put lots of effort into it. Several days later, surprisingly, I got a call from the coach, he said that I could train with the team for several months, and we’ll see what happens after that. I was thrilled when I heard this. That means I could finally have the opportunity to receive professional guidance.

During the time I spent on the team, I made quite a few friends, and we played football together during breaks every day. And at weekends, we would meet up at the football field, chilling out and enjoying ourselves.

After a few months, our skills improved dramatically, and my dream finally came true. I officially became a member of the team.

Now I think about that experience, I was still really proud that I could take part in some matches on behalf of my school.

 

    有心的孩子们,可能还会想到要把上面的素材挪用到“something you do to keep fit”,是的,play football是项运动啊,肯定强身健体啊!于是大家改编起来把!

 

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