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从考官范文里找寻写作的感觉

2015-07-28 09:28

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作者:吉林新东方 陈思佳

 初学的鸭鸭有福利啦,如果你还不知道该如何复习写作,如果你不知道自己写得作文时好时坏,如果你还没有尝试过新东方老师的课堂,那么你可以先从下面的步骤开始你的雅思写作复习计划,当然如果你还是有些地方无法参悟的话,说明你不能独立完成该项复习,该报课就报个课吧!

  我们永远不会对官方的任何材料说不,对于写作来说官方范文就是最宝贵的财富。但是如何看范文才能让鸭鸭们自己顺利地写出文章呢?让老师带你走进雅思小作文吧。

  剑7Test2范文

  The graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

  In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed.

  However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.

  The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.

  Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.

  step1: 直译考官范文,了解字面意思,记录生词,并识记。

  step2: 分析每一句话对应图上的哪个部分描述

  step3: 搞清每个段落的写作意图,如何分段

  step4: 弄懂每个句子之间的关系,尤其画出句子之间的连接成分

  step5: 完成以上理解范文的部分就要开始仿写范文咯!

  请逐段仿写,切莫急于求成:

  范文开头: The graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

  新题仿写: The graph illustrates changes in the sales of children’s books, adults’ fictions and educational books in a particular country between 2002 and 2006.

  范文第二段: In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed.

  新题仿写: In 2002 adults’ fictions were the most popular of these kinds of books, with about 45 million dollars;children’s books were a little less than them (around 33 million dollars), while much less educational books were sold.

  范文第三段: However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.

  新题仿写: However, during this 5-year period the sales of children’s books increased to approximately 55 million dollars. Although during 2003 to 2005 the inclining speed slowed down,it rose dramatically during 2005 to 2006. The sales of educational books also grew, but less significantly to about 32 million dollars. It used to rise to over 30 in 2003 but declined after that year.

  范文第四段: The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.

  新题仿写: The sales of adults’ fiction, on the other hand, showed a downward trend, overtaken by that of children’s books in 2003 and that of educational books in 2006. By 2006 it had declined to 30 million dollars.

  范文结尾段: Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.

  新题仿写: Overall, the graph shows how the sales of adults’ fiction decreased dramatically while the popularity of these other books increased over the period.

  这回有没有感觉思路比较清晰,用下面这个图,检验一下自己学习的成果吧。如果不确定自己完成的任务是否合乎雅思标准,记得找个专业的老师给你提点哦

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