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[四级写作]2015年12月四级考试写作解析--任昉

2016-05-08 13:53

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作者:吉林新东方 任昉

吉林新东方 任昉
任昉:

主授课程:雅思,托福写作,四六级,考研写作,雅思口语,倍学口语。
教育背景:毕业于澳大利亚新南威尔士大学,曾就职于悉尼市前锦国际教育并担任中澳高级留学顾问。课堂气氛轻松有趣,授课风格活泼但不失严谨。

2015年12月 – 四级第一套卷写作部分
四级写作部分的难度在近30年不断地改革出新中其实并没有明显的变化,仍然秉持了一直的老三段写作套路,并且观点提出部分也依然有规律可循,所以今天拿最近一次四级考试的写作题目和大家分享解题思路和范文参考。
题目如下:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being creative rather than mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words, no more than 180 words.
可以看出题目包含两个主要内容:

  • Write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen”
  • You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being creative rather than mere onlookers in life

所以当同学们看到题目之后首先应该知道本次写作题目核心为:the importance of being creative rather than mere onlookers in life。学生可以以此为题或者进行适当改写。同时要对于题目中的引号部分进行一定改写引述并可作为文章开头部分。参考范例如下:
As a saying goes, ‘ Never wait for things to happen, take actions to create’. People, especially for young people, should have the motivation to create a brand-new world belonging to them instead of being a bystander.
第二段的内容顺其自然要写到具有创造力而不做旁观者的积极影响来证明创造的重要性,一般谈论到影响,同学们可以从竞争力(competitiveness),就业(employment),心理身体因素(physical and psychological factors), 经济(economy),效率(effectiveness),经验(experience),知识(knowledge),环境(environment),人际关系(interpersonal relationship)几个方面思考。对于本题,可以选取心理因素,经验,知识这几个方面进行细节论证。所以第二段可分为‘总述+分论点’两个部分,参考范例如下:
总述:Creativity, one of the most indispensable abilities in one’s entire life, can produce a series of countless benefits on personal development.
分论点:此时需要逻辑连接词将各个分论点连接
Firstly, compared with the passive onlookers, creative individuals tend to be more self-motivated, which enables them to have positive attitude toward life.
Secondly, the accumulation of a wide range of knowledge seems to be fairly essential to creators. That is to say, the pursuit of creativity can urge people to acquire knowledge constantly.
Last but not the least, precious and valuable experience could be obtained due to the failure and challenges from the process of creating.
第三段的总结性发言,需要进行提倡和号召,并且提出个人观点。在同学们考试的时候要看前文的字数是否充足,如果较少,那第三段的内容需要相应的增加。
In my humble opinion, it is high time for college students to start from being creative in academic fields and applying workable knowledge that they have learned into practice.

参考范文:
As a saying goes, ‘ Never wait for things to happen, take actions to create’. People, especially for young people, should have the motivation to create a brand-new world belonging to them instead of being a bystander.
Creativity, one of the most indispensable abilities in one’s entire life, can produce a series of countless benefits on personal development. Firstly, compared with the passive onlookers,creative individuals tend to be more self-motivated, which enables them to have positive attitude toward life. Secondly, the accumulation of a wide range of knowledge seems to be fairly essential to creators. That is to say, the pursuit of creativity can urge people to acquire knowledge constantly. Last but not the least, precious and valuable experience could be obtained due to the failure and challenges from the process of creating.
In my humble opinion, it is high time for college students to start from being creative in academic fields and applying workable knowledge that they have learned into practice.  (164字)

 

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